Eric B.

Thanks very much for the feedback. I guess you win some and lose some haha. I will try to learn from this failure and write something better next time. This ...

Fresh blood On a new page. Reading life's lines Before they are written. Every word Stands to conceal Thoughts of the free mind. Resounding thoughts through corridors of fine brickwork, ...

Very great writing! I actually liked how you emphasized the dust by repeating it. This poem gave a very strong image of the cowboy and the plains. However, it did ...

It's clearly saying that since an atheist doesn't believe in a deity, they are friendless nobodies that never accomplished anything in life and are going to have an equally unimportant ...

Thank you very much Via and June. Both for the read and the suggestions. I'm learning more and more as I go about structuring my work, so the feedback helps ...

Look to the moon. On a night where the clouds appear as a painting, Captured in a still frame. When your breath is the only movement, And the once furious ...

Thank you for reading. I really liked your interpretation :). Punctuation in poetry has been something I've been needing to get a little better at.

Thanks for the input universe. I'm glad my first impression on the site was a good one haha. I should be finishing up my latest one in the next few ...

Tonight I shot for the stars, And missed. Leaving myself stranded in the depths of space, Unable to return to where I was before. The comfort of lies, The burden ...